Writes Under Waterfalls

Firstly, I have to admidt, I didn't read your first story, so I don't know whether or not this is an improvement, but I really like it as it is ...

Wow. This is beautiful. I can tell this is a really personal story for you. But, then again, all great stories are personal. But, I digress. Good things: -You captured ...

Wow. Okay, this is why I love sci-fi, because you can be totally out there and your readers will get it. That being said, there was still some weirdness that ...

I really enjoyed this piece. I think it's very relateable, school stresses a lot of people out and I definately know what it feels like to think your best isn't ...

Okay, so, godd things and bad things here. First, the good things: -Intruguing characters. You manage to show-not-tell about the lives of Kira and Genna enough so that we care ...